The hospital door snapped closed behind me. I reached for my small, crimson bag hanging on the plain yellow hook.
It had been a long day at work; there were many injured people filtering in in a constant stream. I hurriedly turned around, wishing to get home as soon as possible so that I could remove my nurse's uniform. Just as I was about to hop off the porch, a strange sight stopped me in my tracks.
There was a girl, probably not more than seventeen years old, running along the edge of the small meadow. I watched her expertly choose where to put her feet as she ran.
Out of curiosity, I watched her pick her way quickly along the retaining wall.
She leaped off of the wall, and sprinted toward me. However, it did not seem as if she was running to me.
She reached a large tree and to my horror, began to climb.
She reached a small point where a large branch met the tree trunk, and I saw her starting to reach for a dangerously skinny branch. She grabbed the tree branch, and I started running towards her faster.
The branch snapped, and I saw her fall.
She hit the ground, and I heard a dull "thunk."
I finally reached the spot where she lay. I gently turned her over, and could feel her taking deep, heaving breaths. Relief flooded over me.
I helped her up and dragged her towards the hospital, with her still unconscious.
~TO BE CONTINUED~
I know you all are wondering if she dies because of her fall, and my answer is no (thankfully). Anyway, what do you think so far? I'm sorry the photos look so bad. It was really windy the day I took them, and so it kept knocking Molly and Lissie over. They each faceplanted into the grass about three times each. Also, don't forget to give me ideas for the name!
One more thing, June and I literally finished watching the Isabelle movie ten minutes ago. I actually enjoyed it. McKenna's movie and Saige's movie seemed too cheesy to me. However, I think the Isabelle movie realistically only had a few cheesy parts (the lunchroom dance at the beginning being one of them). June and I also thought that Renata was more than a bit over the top. She was so rude! Anyway, I like the way it ended and I hope that Coco's movie will be a lot like it. Thanks for reading!!
~<3Ginny~
P.S. Thanks for 6 followers!! Also, it's only twelve more days 'til BeForever!!
These photos are so so cute!
ReplyDeleteAllison
XOXO
Thank you so much! :)
Delete~<3Ginny~
Nice photo story! Could you tell me a bit about the storyline so I could think of some names?
ReplyDelete- Zoë
Yes of course! I haven't worked out every detail, but its basically that Felicity's character goes on this journey to find her sister and it starts with her falling out of the tree. Then the Nurse tries to stop her from leaving and stuff like that. Sorry, I'm still working out most of the story in my head. :)
Delete~<3Ginny~
Whoa! I can already tell this is going to be amazing!!! I'm totally hooked!!!
ReplyDelete~Maddie
Thank you Maddie!
DeleteI think the series could be called The Last Limb. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat idea :) I like it ;)
Delete~<3Ginny~
This is so cool! I can't wait for more :) As for the name . . . is there a really important part in the storyline? Like something that the whole story kind of forms around? Sorry if this isn't making sense . . .
ReplyDeleteI cant think of anything super important other than Felicity's character falling out of the tree...also, Lissie's character is very secretive. :)
Delete~<3Ginny~
For only being the first episode, you have me hooked. I can't wait for more!
ReplyDelete-Cassie ^.^
Thank you so much!
Delete~<3Ginny~
Like it.
ReplyDeleteNo i did not like it. I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you! :)
Delete~<3Ginny~
I love this! I can't wait for more!!
ReplyDelete~ Mint
Thank you so much!
Delete~<3Ginny~
Interesting!! I'm bad at names, so I don't know.
ReplyDeleteHehe, that's alright I am too! XD
Delete~<3Ginny~